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The Art of Killing
Old 01-06-2008, 12:14 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Shouting your name as I feel the pain
that overtakes my mind.
Enough no more, I kick down the door,
approaching from behind.

You cheat; you lie, so now you die,
removed is your backbone.
You scream; you kick, physically sick,
your colors truly shown.

She’s here you know, to watch the show,
to see who will prevail.
She watches, waits; she glares, irate;
the hammer to my nail.

So now it ends, the blade descends,
with you bent low on knee.
I stand with pride; the smile, I hide
for I have just killed me.









(This is not a suicide note, but instead a symbol in that I'm killing the old me in order to change.)
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Old 01-06-2008, 04:21 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I take it you wrote that?
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Old 01-06-2008, 04:28 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Indeed I did
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Old 01-06-2008, 04:33 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Very impressive. I like it. Thanks for posting it here.
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Old 01-06-2008, 04:39 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Not a problem
I will put up 2 more poems by the end of the night
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Old 01-07-2008, 12:08 AM   #6 (permalink)
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More impressive stuff Uriel. What kind of stuff do you like to read if I can ask?


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Old 01-07-2008, 11:11 AM   #7 (permalink)
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That is a little masterpiece. Worthy of merit and my appreciation will be hitting the rep button.




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Old 01-07-2008, 02:30 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Ill read anything
mainly fantasy
every now and then ill read horror
or even suspense
basically if a friend recommends it then i will read it


thanks for the reps
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Old 01-08-2008, 07:56 AM   #9 (permalink)
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I like this one too ... I gotta go spread some rep before I can give you more but you are definitely getting more
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