Nightfaery's poetic place

NightFaery · 06-28-2007, 10:02 PM

I want to see who here can right a 4 lne poem:

crowgyrl · 06-28-2007, 10:46 PM

Quoting: NightFaery

I want to see who here can right a 4 lne poem:

Proper poem -- rhyming etc? Or any?

NightFaery · 06-28-2007, 10:48 PM

any!!

crowgyrl · 06-28-2007, 10:57 PM

Passion burnt this heart before,
Seering my confusion into permanency,
Your memories taunting me,
Pushing me towards the deepest of agony.

NightFaery · 06-28-2007, 11:06 PM

very nice

now whom can do a poem with ryhming for 7 lines?

DirtBag · 07-06-2007, 04:37 AM

I'm an idiot in the first degree,
I've wasted every opportunity,
I'm half the man I was
and half the man I oughta be
I'm an idiot in the first degree
second verse
same as the first

NightFaery · 07-07-2007, 11:05 PM

Thank you DB for your lovely poem!!!!

cute very cute.....I am so glad to see you about makes me happy just to see your name

Okay anyone for a 6 line total ryming poem???!!!

**Noodles** · 07-07-2007, 11:06 PM

Bring it on NF.

NightFaery · 07-07-2007, 11:11 PM

Quoting: Noodles

Bring it on NF.

okay you suply the poem I suply the gift!!!!

Don't look back. Something might be gaining on you.

-Satchel Paige

**Noodles** · 07-07-2007, 11:18 PM

Uh Oh I am not not a poet. I will need some time.

Do all six lines have to rhyme?

DirtBag · 07-07-2007, 11:23 PM

I think of you, you think of me
with you bent across my knee
touching you most pleasantly
while you enjoy it nearly silently
the occasional gasp letting me
know just how aroused you can be

I got a million of 'em......

As for the "idiot" poet that's the first part of a song I was writing

NightFaery · 07-07-2007, 11:24 PM

All six lines need to rhyme with themselves does that make sence? Okay I will just say yes they do....I am sure you can come up with something even silmple poems get prizes!!!!

DirtBag · 07-07-2007, 11:28 PM

See? Six rhyming lines in no time flat